Maads CCA App

Requirements:

Name:Richard Willison

CID:80344

Give a three paragraph summary of your characters life BEFORE the seven hour war:

My name is Richard Willison. It was a regular afternoon. Coming back from a horrible low pay day. sitting on the sofa. Turning on CNN. It was something about a Black Mesa incident and it showed camera footage of some kind of ailen's. I started to get scared.

I stayed up all day that day. watching the news hoping the aliens don't get out. Finally the news assured us that "Highly Armed Personnel were being sent." I finally felt assured and fell asleep. A day later we received interesting news.

Everywhere  were portal storms. EVERYWHERE! Ailen's started to pour down on earth and the armed personnel were dying.  City's became destroyed horribly by the ailen's. Ailen's started to destroy most small city's (ones that weren't claimed as city 17 city blah and all the city's)

Luckily. There were certain city's that still had military defending. I was in one called City 45. The civilization there was perfectly fine there and unharmed. But then. One day. The military let down there defense and everything went to hell. Millions of people died. But that was before.

Before the Seven Hour War started...





Roleplay examples:

You and your partner find a anti-citizen yelling about the union and how bad it is, what do you do?: Give them three warnings to face the wall if near one if not lie down on the floor and tie them up and detain them. If they resist. I would detain them for a longer time.


You have standard 03 equipment, five citizen approach you cornering you saying "Drop the items!" What do you do?: I would drop my items. and run to cover and quickly radio for backup.


You have standard 01 equipment,the City Admin decides to go outside for a stroll along the city, while outside rebels attack you. What do you do?: Escort the City Admin quickly to the base and radio for backup if there is a lot if not fire at the rebels.


Reasons for joining the CCA?: I wish to protect the citizens of the Universal Union and assure law and order.

What skills will be useful in the CCA that you have acquired?: I am a very good engineer and good at melee combat and hand to hand.


What is the importance of the CCA?: To protect the citizens and assure law and order in City 45.

Fix it
Many spelling mistakes and other mistakes worth looking at, I believed you rushed this too fast.

Fix It

Indeed you spelling errors are many punctuation is incorrect and you barely made a backstory.
Also to fore note this is rushed role-play examples are not really examples and are very skimmed this application can be read in 1 minute and 20 seconds.

Fixed Spelling Errors. Fixed the examples kind of. Don't know what you mean by backstory. (Too short..? if so i studied gandalfs app soo...)

Denied
Backstory was too short, used periods where commas where needed and was still missing spelling corrections. Otherwise then that it was all right.