Jakey's Vortigaunt Application

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Three paragraph backstory of how you came to earth: Ven 'Zenio' Ken was a baby on Xen , captured by some explorers, they took Ven in , and did some experiments that hurted , and took care of Ven till he was older, but then , Xen Creatures invaded from my homeworld, They we're destroying everything , killing scientists, For some reason Ven felt rescued, but he could hardly get out due to it being a high facility and debris/fire was everywhere, Ven was quickly ventured to the top. he was ventureing until he found some soldiers aiming guns at him, Ven had no chance but to kill them with his powers, and keep running to the top, And escape with my brothers, Ven's sister was captured in the facility raid by some Soldiers that looked familiar to the ones he killed, Now Ven seek's revenge upon those soldiers and hopefully to rescue my sister once again , But then, Years past when he was still currently looking, Lot has changed , The war began, and some soldiers invaded camps/villiages, they found Ven and put him in straps, taking him on a train to City 45 , Now , Ven is a biotic cleaning the city streets, hoping to escape and run away to freedom and hopefully find his sister once again. She will be found by Ven, lot of plans are taken.


One night, When no units we're online , Ven dropped his broom, Running to the slums entrance, Once he passed through the slums entrance, the straps had a alarm on it, It alerted civil protection units, But Ven was gone before they could reach the slums's entrance in time, Ven seeked quickly into the slums, going deeper as I go , Ven find's a place to rest for the night , and worry about his sister and himself next day, Ven woke up , and Two people with uniforms and guns approached Ven, They took Ven into this ''Rebellion'' Somehow they took Ven's straps off, and Ven was finally free, now he had to quickly regain and meditate Ven's powers on, After that, Ven quickly attempted to venture for his sister around, But she was never outside , One day , Ven saw his sister, But she was guarded with 2 units , Seeing as Ven escaped the alarm has alerted units to guard the biotics more time , Makeing his y sister's escape or rescue even harder, Ven went back to the home that he was taken into by some people in uniforms.


Ever since Ven found out about the guards, he gave up, but never doubted that one day Ven will regain his trust , and regain backup, to teach the combine scum a lesson. For now, Ven layed low till things in the plaza chilled down, So Ven wasn't seen for a long time until things have came down, But Ven was sleeping and thinking about his sister, Will he ever stand up and do another plan to save his sister and teach the combine scum a lesson? Or will Ven have to give up and leave his sister in captivity? Forever..

What type of vortigaunt are you? A Enslaved Vortigaunt? Or a Free Vortigaunt? : Free Vortigaunt


Roleplay Examples for Enslaved Vortigaunts

The combine find you outside with citizens and raise their batons, what do you do?

The commander drops his 9mm pistol on accident, what do you do?

You are told to clean the outside streets as a recruit leads you, but as he leads you he tells you he is freeing you, what do you do?



Roleplay Examples for Free Vortigaunts

You are talking with the rebel leader but as you do you hear footsteps of overwatch units approaching, what do you do? : Possibly take cover and fight them off , If not, attempt to escape and hide in a dark place.

You are outside at night with no units in your location, suddenly there is screams, what do you do?: Investigate the screams before a unit came out, and help that citizen/thing out with it's problems.

You are captured by the Combine although you have powers and are strapped to a torture chair you see the commander that put you there, what do you do?: Possibly attempt to disable anything tortureous before the commander could do anything to me with it, and possibly fear the worst.

End of application.

-Fix it

Backstory seems to make your vortigaunt a little too badass and there are some grammar errors, this is your only chance to fix it.

When the lab exploded.. it was probably during the Black Mesa Accident, as I assume..
At this time, the Combine hadn't invaded. They invaded later, yes , but at the exact time they didn't.
And if the "soldiers" fount you.. it wouldn't have been regular Combine MPF.. it would have been Synth Soldiers made by the Universal Union witch are very strong, and probably used to invade Earth during The 7 Hour War. In reality, they would have killed you most likely, not taking prisoners..
Last but not least..
You also said: "One night, When no units we're online , Ven dropped his broom, Running to the slums entrance." ICly there would be at least a thousand units online, watching you.
You would have been re-captured if not killed.
You also said when you went outside your collar triggered an alarm, that alerted units. How would this be possible if no units were online, according to you?
Fix these, immedietly.


- Support.

Mr.Antaoly excuse me but isn't there dead people in HEV suits in Half-life 1 when you get to Xen?

Ah, my mistake John.
Yes, there were actually people on Xen

Denied

Had time to fix it, but did not.